Hello To Our Readers

This issue’s premise was deceptively simple: write a story about character(s) who face a significant loss. Perhaps one-third of all published fiction fits that premise to some degree. For that reason, writing a story that brings something new and makes the story compelling is difficult. Our winning authors were up to the challenge. They have each created a story that rewards readers with a fresh perspective or interesting new twist on familiar themes.

Most challenging for the judges was selecting the winning stories from a large pool of intriguing, well crafted entries presented in a wide variety of styles. To narrow the field, we demanded stories be excellent in all four of our judging criteria.

And speaking of judging, here are some questions on judging we’ve received at
On The Premises.

Did you read my story? Yes! This is a contest-based magazine that is judged blindly. We read every story (except those that do not comply with the rules) because every story could be the winner.

You say you judge blindly, but I just got an e-mail asking a question about my story. How does that work? Division of labor. Each contest has an administrative judge, a reading judge, and prize judges. The administrative judge processes all entries and serves as our liaison to the authors. The reading judge, as the name implies, reads every story. If the reading judge has a question about the author’s intent, the administrative judge contacts the author for clarification. At the end of the contest, the reading judge selects 10 finalists to send to the prize judges, while the administrative judge e-mails contestants with entry status (finalist or not). The prize judges read the stories chosen as finalists and rank them. The rankings are then tallied to determine the contest winners.

The judges sent a critique of my story saying it had typographical errors. Typos are easy to fix. Why did that little thing count against me? Craft is one of our judging criteria. And part of being well-crafted is following rules for spelling, usage, and punctuation, unless there is a clear story-related reason to break them. Between two otherwise equal stories, the better proofread story will always win. And nothing says “I want to win” more than a story that’s been carefully reviewed to remove little errors.

Has your regular cartoonist returned from his alien encounter? Absolutely.

What’s the best way to improve my chances of winning? Keep writing and keep reading.

Bethany Granger,
co-publisher of
On The Premises magazine